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		<title>Greseli de gramatica in &#8220;50 Shades of Grey&#8221;</title>
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				<description><![CDATA[Cu toate ca 50 Shades of Grey a ajuns in topul listei de bestsellere din toata lumea, romanul erotico-romantic al scriitoarei E. L. James a fost aspru criticat  din cauza utilizarii sarace a limbajului sau a greselilor de punctuatie si de gramatica. Aici ne referim la versiunea in limba engleza a cartii mult cunoscute. Persoanele &#8230; <a href="https://tovarashul.eu/greseli-de-gramatica-in-50-shades-of-grey/" class="more-link">Continuă să citești <span class="screen-reader-text">Greseli de gramatica in &#8220;50 Shades of Grey&#8221;</span></a>]]></description>
								<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cu toate ca 50 Shades of Grey a ajuns in topul listei de bestsellere din toata lumea, romanul erotico-romantic al scriitoarei E. L. James a fost aspru criticat  din cauza utilizarii sarace a limbajului sau a greselilor de punctuatie si de gramatica. Aici ne referim la versiunea in limba engleza a cartii mult cunoscute.</p>
<p>Persoanele de la Grammarly au trecut aceasta carte prin programul lor corector  si au ajuns la concluzia ca exista o serie de greseli de top frecente in carte. Apoi, ne-au aratat felul in care le-am putea repara si corecta. Pentru ca fiecare carte &#8220;murdara&#8221; are nevoie de o gramatica curata.</p>
<h2>Erori de punctuatie in propozitiile complexe</h2>
<p>James nu este prima autoare care sa includa o virgula  in lucrarea ei atunci cand ar fi fost mai adecvata utilizarea semnului punct si virgula sau chiar invers. Propozitia originala din <em>Fifty Shades of Grey</em>: &#8220;Oh my. My heartbeat picks up again, this feels so&#8230; so good.&#8221;</p>
<p>Sugestia pentru editare si corectare ar fi: &#8220;Oh my. My heartbeat picks up again<b>;</b> this feels so&#8230; so good.&#8221;</p>
<h2>Utilizarea gresita a virgulei</h2>
<p>Multi scriitori uita sa includa o virgula atunci cand aceasta este necesara sau din contra includ o virgula atunci cand nu este nevoie de asa ceva. Propozitia originala: &#8220;I open my eyes, and for a moment, I&#8217;m tranquil and serene, enjoying the strange unfamiliar surroundings. I have no idea where I am.&#8221;</p>
<p>Sugestia de editare si corectare: &#8220;I open my eyes, and for a moment, I&#8217;m tranquil and serene, enjoying the strange<b>,</b> unfamiliar surroundings. I have no idea where I am.&#8221;</p>
<h2>Verbozitatea</h2>
<p>De fapt, aceasta este o greseala destul de comuna. Cuvinte ca, &#8220;actually,&#8221; &#8220;sort of,&#8221; si &#8220;really&#8221; adauga o lungire inutila a scrierii. Originalul: &#8220;He&#8217;s so passionate, mesmerizing. This is obviously his obsession, the way he is&#8230; I can&#8217;t take my eyes off him. He really, really wants this. He stops talking and gazes at me&#8221;, ar putea fi inlocuit cu usurinta cu forma: &#8220;He&#8217;s so passionate, mesmerizing. This is obviously his obsession, the way he is&#8230; I can&#8217;t take my eyes off him. He really wants this. He stops talking and gazes at me.&#8221;</p>
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